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Imperium Omni: Captain's Edition Paperback – April 10, 2016
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- Print length652 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateApril 10, 2016
- Dimensions6 x 1.63 x 9 inches
- ISBN-101507603908
- ISBN-13978-1507603901
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- Publisher : CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform (April 10, 2016)
- Language : English
- Paperback : 652 pages
- ISBN-10 : 1507603908
- ISBN-13 : 978-1507603901
- Item Weight : 1.49 pounds
- Dimensions : 6 x 1.63 x 9 inches
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Imperium Omni is a fantasy story based on an RPG (role playing game) board game and I have to say I felt that it really worked. The writing was really well done and rich in detail, The world building was immersive and I could really picture myself with the characters.
To make it work for readers who play RPGs, there are certain symbols at important spots throughout the story, which you can then go to the section at the back of the book for more details. If you're not a RPG player or only play casually like myself, then you can just read on past these symbols and nothing is taken away from the story itself. As a side note, I think the author would make an awesome DM (Dungeon Master) if he plays D&D!
I really like the main character Shadow, a half elf, and I thought he was really rounded, though at times he spoke far more than necessary. We follow him on his first assignment as an Explorer and he is excited to start having adventures and seeing the world while completing his duty. He meets a whole cast of characters on the way, some a lot nicer than others as well as a love interest which feels a little forced, but it may become more natural in the next book.
The only thing I would say is that the chapters are far too long in this book, there are 468 pages and only 5 chapters. The author does explain in the introduction why they have done this, but I much prefer faster paced, shorter chapters to keep me reading. I also hate putting a book down at an unnatural break.
Overall though a really enjoyable read and one I would recommend, I will also be reading the next book in the series when that comes out.
PROS:
1. The world-building/races/skill- is pretty interesting if you're into all that. (I'm not, so I skimmed a lot of it).
2. There are some interesting events within the story.
3. There are a few action scenes, and two of them (notably) are pretty interesting to read.
PRO? CON?
~RPG novel: The introduction let's you know that it's based on a role-playing game, and many times it reads that way (especially for those that have DMs heavily into planning rather than allowing the campaigns to run-in head first and hope for the best). There were far too many details (in my opinion) on many aspects of the world and on the characters leveling up.
CONS:
1. Sentence Structure: Run-ons, fragments, and dangling modifies littered the book. Not all of the sentences were poorly constructed, but the ones that are can be overly distracting if you're sensitive to them.
2. Chapter breaks (or lack thereof): SERIOUSLY! The book is sizable and I think it has 5 or 6 chapters. I found it ridiculous that I had to read 30% of the book before I came to the 2nd chapter!
3. Too much dialogue: Instead of the exciting action scenes as they go through everything, the author relies on heavily scripted dialogues and plans. Many of the action scenes were either something along the lines of either: "and it went pretty easily" or after a small skirmish/descriptive scene: "and so it went for the next several days."
4. Flat Characters: Personally, I felt that most of the characters felt kind of flat and/or nothing distinguishing about them. The main character, Shadow, is 'smart' but speaks before thinking. The female elf also seems smart and quieter(?) except for when she gets angry and lashes out and she doesn't have very many skills in diplomacy. The other two main characters (the fighter and the mage) are more well-seasoned in terms of battle. Unless there were some context clues (specific to their class), I would have no idea who was talking. Needless to say, I was not invested in any of the characters.
5. I thought the romantic relationship between the female and Shadow was forced. It didn't come off as genuine. Their two sexual encounters were far apart and somewhat random. One of the scenes was a little graphic (no actual sex) and the other was a hinted scene that that's what was going to actually happen--as told through DIALOGUE. I think the book could have done without it.
In short, thanks for the read. I'm sorry I didn't like it. Even though there are some loose ends that have not been tied up, I have zero interest in reading the sequel.
The Creators Of This Game Envisioned,
I Am So Very Excited For Its Arrival..
Congratulations To All...
WELL DONE!!!